Petting the Dog with a Pen

Ever heard that pets can discern the good from the bad in people? While this may be up for debate, what's certain is the literary potential of this idea.

"Saving the cat" has long been a narrative tool to cultivate empathy for a character. It's not about literal feline rescue but the kind-hearted actions or traits that make readers cheer for a protagonist.

But did you know about the equally potent technique of "petting the dog"? Introduced by James Scott Bell in his book, "Write Your Novel from the Middle", it's a strategy applied later in the story. This gesture, often performed just before a significant challenge, underscores a character's empathetic nature, reminding readers of their heart and what's at stake.

For example, in "The Hunger Games", Katniss not only spares her sister's cat but also protects Rue, the youngest tribute. Yet, petting the dog isn't exclusive to heroes. Even the supposed villain, Thresh, has a poignant moment when he spares Katniss out of respect for her kindness to Rue. This brings me to a pivotal point: even antagonists can benefit from such moments.

Empathy for the Villain 

Remember Thanos? His universe-altering mission involves sacrificing his daughter. Yet, a flashback showing him saving her as a child adds depth to his character. Or consider Killmonger from *Black Panther*, whose background sheds light on his motivations, evoking reader empathy.

The Dark Romance Angle 

In dark romances, such moments often reveal the concealed good deeds of the protagonist. Though I'm not an avid reader of dark tales, I can't help but gush over Rhys Winterbourne from Lisa Kleypas's world. Despite his initial portrayal as a villain, he nurtures orchids – a token from his beloved Helen, symbolizing his care and commitment.

Your Next Steps: 

Use the "pet the dog" moment to heighten the stakes, reminding readers of potential losses. Introducing it for antagonists or complicated heroes can muddle loyalties, making readers rethink their allegiances.

So, don't just save the cat – pet the dog too! Embrace a narrative full of heart and depth.

Happy writing.

Ines