Stuck in the Messy Middle

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Last week, I was deep in the messy middle of writing my latest book. Things were not working out. So what did I do? I took a break and I think you should too.

The "messy middle" or the second act of your manuscript is the part of your story where the initial excitement may begin to wane, plot holes become apparent, and your characters might seem like they're rebelling against your plans. This is a natural part of writing a book, and there are effective strategies to help you navigate and conquer this mid-story crisis.

The middle of your book bridges the introduction with the climax and resolution. It’s where you develop subplots, deepen character arcs, and lay the groundwork for the story's resolution. However, it's also a phase where the direction can become unclear and momentum may falter.

Strategies for Overcoming the Mid-Manuscript Slump

Take a Strategic Break

Sometimes, stepping away is exactly what you need. When you're too close to the manuscript, every issue can seem magnified, and frustration can cloud your creativity. Take some time off. Read a book, watch movies, or spend time with loved ones. Engage in activities that replenish your creative well and give you a fresh perspective. A little distance can make a significant difference in how you view your story’s trajectory upon your return.

I do NOT write on Fridays. I instituted this policy a few years ago. Monday through Thursday, I’m in my office at 8am and I write with friends until about noon. It’s non-negotiable. And it’s how I get so much done. But I wanted a weekday where I could sleep in, go see a matinee, or hang out at a coffee shop while everyone was at school or work. So Friday’s became my Artist Date Day. I think having that day as a non-writing day truly lets me get more on the page for the other week days.

Revisit Your Outline

If you find yourself stuck, go back to your original outline (if you have one). Compare where your story currently heads versus what you initially planned. Sometimes, the story veers off in unexpected directions, and not always for the better. Realigning with your original vision can help you identify where things got off track and what you might need to revise to improve flow and cohesion.

Analyze Your Character Motivations

If your characters seem to be "misbehaving" or not cooperating with the plot, it might be time to reassess their motivations. Are their actions consistent with their desires and the obstacles they face? Strong, clear motivations can rejuvenate stagnant character arcs and drive the plot forward more dynamically.

Enhance Subplots

The middle is an excellent time to flesh out subplots that enrich the main story. If your primary plot feels sluggish, perhaps a subplot could introduce new conflicts, themes, or emotional depth, adding layers and interest to the narrative.

Seek Feedback

Sometimes, you might be too close to the project to see the issues clearly. This is where feedback from beta readers, writing groups, or a trusted critique partner can be invaluable. They might spot problems you’ve overlooked or offer suggestions that can spark new ideas and directions.

Set Small, Achievable Goals

Breaking down your tasks into smaller, manageable goals can help maintain a sense of progress and momentum. Instead of thinking about the entire second act, focus on completing a scene or a chapter at a time.

Embrace the Process

Remember, it’s okay for the middle to be messy initially. Most first drafts are. The key is to recognize that this is part of the process and not a sign of failure. Every story has its challenges, and overcoming them is what makes you a stronger writer.

The middle of your manuscript doesn't have to be a roadblock. With the right strategies, a bit of time, and perhaps some fresh inspiration, you can steer your story back on course and enjoy the journey to its final chapters.

Here’s to conquering the messy middle and making your story the best it can be!

Next week, I’ll be presenting a workshop to the paid members of the group. It will be on my 10 Tips to Writing a Sweet Romance. I might follow it up with my Writing Dirty Presentation aka How to Put the Bang In Your Character Arcs.